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PANEL ONE: Dylan ruffles Eddie’s hair, affectionately. Eddie loves the attention.
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He saw me have an “accident” and told me it was okay, he knew just what it was like to have “surprises” happen.

PANEL TWO: Eddie thinks about it, he has a crafty idea face like he is thinking of something naughty.

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I loved the attention he gave me...and the word “surprise” gave me an idea.

PANEL THREE: Dylan and Eddie are walking down a street that has a row of shops. They each have shopping bags.

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Later that day when we were out shopping together, I put my plan into action.

PANEL FOUR: Dylan and Eddie have stopped to look into a shop window with toys in it, Eddie is looking adoringly up at Dylan.

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I wanted to be as childish as I could be, so I could be just like my hero…

PANEL FIVE: Close up on Eddie as he looks over his shoulder down to the back of his pants.

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And I had planned a little “surprise” to happen while we were out…

PANEL SIX: Close-up on Eddie’s backside as he fills his pants, the big lump in his pants should be large.

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...but it wasn’t very “little” after all!

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