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PANEL ONE: GLENN comes into DYLAN’s bedroom. It’s morning. He’s calling for Dylanto wake up. He knocks on the doorframe as he walks in to the room.

GLENN:
Hey Dylan, wake up! Breakfast is ready!

PANEL TWO: GLENN gently shakes DYLAN’s shoulder, as he snores peacefully in bed, completely asleep.

GLENN:
C’mon, sleepyhead…

SFX:
Shake shake

PANEL THREE: GLENN pulls the blankets and sheets off DYLAN, though we don’t see what’s revealed yet.

GLENN:
Okay, buddy, let’s go…hup!

PANEL FOUR: GLENN stares off-panel, his eyes wide.

GLENN:
Oh man.

PANEL FIVE: We see DYLAN, still asleep and lying on his back, wearing a huge cloth diaper with pins, over which is a pair of semi-seethrough plastic pants. He is soaking wet, so the bedsheets around his diaper are also wet. GLENN is standing off to the side, still holding the blankets, staring.

GLENN:
You’re a bedwetter!

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