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PANEL ONE: JARED is standing beside MICHAEL as he wakes up. We have a close-up of MICHAEL’s face with JARED’s soaking wet diapers and plastic pants just inches away from him.
NARR:
When I woke up next morning, Jared was standing over me.

JARED:
Wake up, bedwetter!

PANEL TWO: JARED looks at MICHAEL’S soaked diapers. He seems impressed.

JARED:
Wow, wet again! I wonder…

PANEL THREE: JARED’s face lights up as he considers MICHAEL as a permanent bedwetter.

JARED:
…maybe you’ve relapsed for good. Maybe you’ll always be a bedwetter now!

PANEL FOUR: MICHAEL gets hard again in his wet diapers. JARED notices.

NARR:
I hadn’t thought of that! Maybe I didn’t have to stop bedwetting at the end of camp…

PANEL FIVE: JARED grins at the hard-on MICHAEL now has in his wet diapers.

NARR:
…and that meant the plan that I thought of the night before was definitely going to start today!

PANEL SIX: JARED is now hard in his wet diapers, and he and MICHAEL are facing each other and grinning.

MICHAEL:
You know, Jared…you might be right!

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