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PANEL ONE: CRAIG is the first to react to MIKE’s story, he’s amazed. All the boys are! MIKE blushes but admits the truth.

CRAIG:
Wow, Mike! You went hardcore!

MIKE:
I think it was always there, I just needed to realize it!

PANEL TWO: DAVE is noticeably hard in his overalls but he himself doesn’t notice. He can’t stop thinking about Lucas bullying Mike. JIM, looking evil and plotting, thinks it’s awesome.

DAVE:
Bullied by your kid brother! That’s just…

JIM:
…awesome.

PANEL THREE: JIM rubs his hands together gleefully, plotting. CRAIG responds questioningly.

JIM:
So! I guess there’s going to be some changes to our game!

CRAIG:
Oh? How so?

PANEL FOUR: We see JIM’s floating head in the narration box, to show that he’s the one speaking, as we focus on Minthor (Mike’s character) looking beefy and butch in his tight leather pants.

JIM:
For one thing, Minthor is going to reveal that he’s a big wimp!

PANEL FIVE: We see MIKE’s floating head as he narrates this next scene. A small creature like a Kobold is taunting MINTHOR, who is wetting his pants.

MIKE:
Yeah, any time he gets teased, he’ll pee his pants on the spot!

PANEL SIX: MIKE continues narrating. MINTHOR watches the KOBOLD walk away laughing. MINTHOR is deliberately messing his leather pants, pushing out a load that stretches the leather.

MIKE:
But that’s not all…! Being bullied makes Minthor feel like such a baby, that he deliberately messes his pants on purpose!

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