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PAGE TWENTY-SEVEN

PANEL ONE: MIKE has a curious, half-smile on his face, like he finds it odd that he likes being wet.

NARR:
I sat there, wet, feeling like a total wuss for losing control…but also feeling, I don’t know, weirdly normal. Like this was how I was supposed to be.

PANEL TWO: LUCAS looks over and reacts with shock at the puddle and state of MIKE’s pants.

NARR:
It didn’t take long for Lucas to notice what I did, either!

LUCAS:
HoLEE! You peed in your pants! You peed ALL THE WAY in your pants!

PANEL THREE: LUCAS grins at MIKE. He has just realized what a wuss his big brother is.

LUCAS:
Wow, you’re a real WUSS!

PANEL FOUR: LUCAS points a demanding, controlling finger at MIKE, and orders him to stay put.

NARR:
And somehow he decided that meant he got to make the rules.

LUCAS:
Now you gotta stay in those wet pants until Dad comes home!

PANEL FIVE: MIKE resumes playing video games, but sneaks a look down at himself–he’s gotten totally hard in his jeans. Beside him, LUCAS sneaks a peek at the bulge in MIKE’s pants without being noticed.

NARR:
And for some reason...I really liked being ordered around like that!

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