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PAGE SIX

PANEL ONE: PAUL grins a daring, taunting grin.

NARR:
His grin got even wider, like he was daring me to say something. But I didn’t. I didn’t even know what I could say.

PANEL TWO: MARK slinks away out the front door, in which doorway PAUL and his girlfriend, arms around each other, stand, with PAUL waving goodbye.

NARR:
We said goodnight, him with an arm around Kim who didn’t seem to care that he was wet and loaded. Like all of this was perfectly normal.

PANEL THREE: The laundry room. MARK is taking clothes out of the dryer and putting them in a laundry basket when PAUL enters.

NARR:
The turning point came the next day, when I was down in the laundry room and Paul walked in and said “hi.”

PANEL FOUR: PAUL chats with MARK, seemingly innocent.

PANEL FIVE: PAUL locks eyes with MARK and grins his sly grin.

NARR:
He was just chatting about the game, and about life in general, when suddenly his eyes met mine and he grinned that sly little smile…

PANEL SIX: PAUL wets his pants while talking as if he’s unaware that it’s happening.

NARR:
…and started wetting his pants while he was talking to me. He kept right on talking while it was happening, like he didn’t notice it.

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